Hello and welcome to my blog!
Feel free to look around, you can search through labels or just have a scroll through the weeks! My blog shows my progress over the A Level course and the production of my music video, music magazine and their ancillary products! Have fun and i hope you enjoy my blog!
Nelly Tookey
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I have asked some class-members and friends about my first draft of my music video, i have also taken in to account the comments on my blog post... they have suggested:
Make the narrative clearer
More performance elements
Possibly include the artist as a character
I will revise my current draft and see what i can do to make these improvements! Thank you all!
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