Here is a first draft of my music video. I have experimented with transitions such as cross dissolve and jump cuts depending on the mood of the music! So far i have included a number of close up shots of my artist however i still need to use more performance which i will be filming soon!
Please feel free to comment any improvements :)
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You've got some beautiful shots and framing throughout. I like that there is some connection between the singer and the actor. I'm still not sure that the storyline with the houses is that clear but it might increase repeatability factor as audiences try to work out the connections. There could still be more performance (although I realise there aren't many lyrics). The sound is a little tiny and you could possibly cut down the start, as it's a long intro.
ReplyDeleteThe quality of the video is really good and the shots are really nice with the sun and the beach etc. It's a bit confusing as to who the man is singing in relation to the main actress. I also like the idea of having the sound of the door slam as it really adds a good effect so you could think about putting that in :)
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